句型结构错误
句型结构错误主要分为句子缺乏成分和句子结构多余两种情况。例如“我们应该参加各类对我们成长有利的实践活动”，错误翻译为“Weshouldtakeartinp Enlishexam”，这是句子结构存在错误，正确的应该是“We should take part in practical activities which are beneficial to our growth.”。还有句子结构多余的情况，如“In my opinion I think the best way to stay beautiful is doing sports.”中，“In my opinion”和“I think”意义重复，用词过于累赘。要避免句型结构错误，在学习英语句型时要理解句子的基本结构，在写作时确保句子结构完整且简洁，写完后可以通过读句子来检查是否通顺。
（三）中式英语错误及规避
逐字翻译
很多学生在写作时会按照汉语的语序和结构进行逐字翻译，从而产生中式英语。例如“打他的脸”，不能写成“beat his face”，而应该是“hit him in the face”或者“strike him on the face”。为了避免逐字翻译，要多学习英语的习惯表达方式，通过阅读英语文章、学习英语例句等方式来积累。在写作时，要从英语的思维角度出发，思考如何用英语准确表达自己的意思，而不是简单地将汉语直接翻译成英语。
受汉语习惯影响的表达
在一些表达上，受汉语习惯的影响，会写出不符合英语习惯的句子。例如“我认为保持美丽的最好方法就是运动”写成“I think the best way to keep beautiful is do sports.”，正确的是“I think the best way to keep beautiful is to do sports.”。要克服这种错误，就要深入了解英汉两种语言在表达习惯上的差异，多模仿英语中的正确表达，逐渐养成用英语思维写作的习惯。
（四）衔接与逻辑错误及规避
连接词误用
学生在写作中常常会出现连接词误用的情况，如“although…but”“because…so”等连用的错误。汉语的复合句讲究对称，连接句子的关联词往往成对出现，但英语的复合句只需要一个连词放在一个从句中就能起到连接作用。例如“Although it was raining heavily, he still went to school.”不能写成“Although it was raining heavily, but he still went to school.”。在学习连接词时，要准确掌握其用法，在写作时注意避免连接词的错误搭配。
逻辑混乱
有些作文会存在逻辑混乱的问题，例如在论述一个观点时，论据与论点不相关或者论述顺序不合理。为了使文章逻辑清晰，在写作前可以先列提纲，明确文章的结构和论述顺序。在论述过程中，要确保每个论据都能有力地支持论点，并且论据之间要有一定的逻辑性。例如在写议论文时，可以按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序进行论述。

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历年英语六级写作真题测试2
题目: The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication
要求: commenting on "Dad: Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read
all about it on my blog, Dad"
范文:
In contemporary society, our life is flled with a variety of anecdotes or stories, and the
following is no exception: "Dad: Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read
all about it on my blog, Dad." Funny as it seems, this conversation can be naturally associated
with the impacts of Internet on our life: In an era of Internet, the time for interpersonal
communication is impaired by online chats or blogs.
Apparently, the impacts of the Internet on interpersonal communication are diverse. For
one thing, as a vital invention, Internet brings great convenience to our communication,
eliminates the barrier of distance, and helps humans to keep in touch wherever and whenever.
For another, it is Intenet that does not enables family members, friends or classmates to
communicate more in a face-to-face way. One case in point is that youngsters may spend
hours chatting with acquaintances through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other
face to face. Unfortunately, it we let this trend to continue as it is, the interpersonal
relationship will, definitely, become alienated. .
To my understanding, it is advisable for people to communicate more with their families,
friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. Do bear in mind:
Internet is just a tool.
历年英语六级写作真题测试3
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同