闵行区业余制大学英语培训

二、记叙文范文
题目：An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer vacation, I had an unforgettable experience - climbing Mount Tai.
I started my journey early in the morning with my friends. As we climbed, the scenery along the way was truly breathtaking. The lush trees, the clear streams, and the fresh air made us feel closer to nature.
However, the climbing process was not easy. The steep slopes and long flights of stairs tested our physical strength and willpower. There were times when I wanted to give up, especially when I saw how high we still had to climb. But with the encouragement of my friends, I kept going.
When we finally reached the top of the mountain, the feeling was indescribable. Standing on the summit, looking at the sea of clouds below and the surrounding mountains in the distance, I felt a great sense of accomplishment. The beautiful sunrise the next morning added more magic to this experience.
This climbing experience taught me that as long as we persevere, we can overcome difficulties and achieve our goals. It also made me appreciate the beauty of nature more deeply. 8
大学英语范文写作常见错误分析
一、语法错误
主谓不一致
在英语句子中，主语和谓语在人称和数上要保持一致。例如“One of my friends like reading.”就是错误的，正确的应该是“One of my friends likes reading.”因为“one of + 复数名词”表示“……之一”，主语是单数概念。
当句子是由and连接的并列主语时，如果表示的是复数概念，谓语用复数形式；如果表示的是一个整体概念，谓语用单数形式。比如“My brother and I are students.”（复数概念）；“Bread and butter is my favorite breakfast.”（整体概念，表示黄油面包这一种食物）。
时态错误
常见的时态错误是混淆不同时态的用法。例如在描述过去发生的事情时用了一般现在时，“I go to the park yesterday.”正确的是“I went to the park yesterday.”
时态的呼应也容易出错。在主从复合句中，如果主句是过去时态，从句一般也要用相应的过去时态。如“He said that he would come to see me.”如果写成“He said that he will come to see me.”就是错误的。
句子结构错误
句子缺乏成分的情况时有发生。比如“Make me very happy.”这个句子缺乏主语，正确的可以是“It makes me very happy.”
句子结构多余也会出现，例如“In my opinion, I think this book is very interesting.”这里“in my opinion”和“I think”语义重复，应去掉其中一个。